Evidence library · 26 reviewed examples

See what changes—and what must not

Each example pairs a diagnosis with an explicit editing choice and a preservation checklist. These are reviewable examples, not proof of authorship.

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What surprised me most was the interesting way three of us replaced a 12-step handoff with one shared review six weeks ago.

Why revise: A performed-surprise opener delays the concrete experience.

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