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What surprised me most was the interesting way three of us replaced a 12-step handoff with one shared review six weeks ago.
Why revise: A performed-surprise opener delays the concrete experience.
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What surprised me most was the interesting way three of us replaced a 12-step handoff with one shared review six weeks ago.
Why revise: A performed-surprise opener delays the concrete experience.
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