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Humanize an essay paragraph

A filler preface and inflated emphasis weaken a precise limitation.

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It is important to note that the trial included only twelve participants, and this limitation is pivotal.

One revision

The trial included only twelve participants, which limits the conclusion.

Why this edit

Lead with the evidence and explain its consequence.

Preservation checklist

  • ✓ the trial had twelve participants
  • ✓ sample size limits the conclusion

Current live diagnosis

The current engines find 2 phrase matches and 2 writing-pattern issues. This result is calculated at page render time.

Signals: It is important to note that, pivotal, tier1, filler

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